src/pages/landing/index.tsx

@@ -69,8 +69,8 @@ export const LandingPage = () => {
       title: <>Verifiable</>,
       description: (
         <>
-          SIGit Agreements can be directly verified - unlike traditional,
-          server-based offerings.
+          Thanks to Schnorr Signatures and Web of Trust, SIGit is far more
+          auditable than traditional server-based offerings.
         </>
       )
     },
@@ -84,8 +84,8 @@ export const LandingPage = () => {
       title: <>Works Offline</>,
       description: (
         <>
-          It is possible to complete a SIGit round without an internet
-          connection.
+          Presuming you have a hardware signing device, it is possible to
+          complete a SIGit round without an internet connection.
         </>
       )
     },
@@ -94,8 +94,8 @@ export const LandingPage = () => {
       title: <>Multi-Party Signing</>,
       description: (
         <>
-          Choose any number of Signers and Viewers, track status, get
-          notifications on completion.
+          Choose any number of Signers and Viewers, track the signature status,
+          send reminders, get notifications on completion.
         </>
       )
     }